Critique #2

Briana

1. The intended color was yellow. I like the lines in the field but wish there were more players so that the flag really stood out. 
2. The colors could be brighter. I feel like I know the car is green, but I want it to be more vibrant and clear. 
3. Would have been more interesting as a close-up, but I like her use of the rule of thirds here.
4. I like this one, the converging lines are conveyed well and the single brown filter of the cigarette is very outstanding. 
5. I feel like I really had to search for the blue hint behind the wood here. 
6. I cannot tell what color she was actually intending on capturing, I feel like there are only dull shades of grays and browns. 
7. I really wish she would have focused more on the brown and less on the green so that it would have that extra pop and stand out from the live part of the bush. 
8. Same with this photo, the focus isn't in the right place. 
9. I like the focus on the orange, but want a more creative point of view. I feel like I don't want to be able to tell exactly where this is in the world. 
10. I love this one, you can see the subtle bits of pink in the little sprouts but at the same time the green is very vibrant and distinct against the brown mulch.